So, what is it like to be a writer? Well, that is a question I am qualified to answer. And what I’m about to say of course does not have to be universal … if you strive to be a writer, your experience indeed could very well be totally different, at least … let’s hope so!
As an aside, check out Literary Publicity … New York Style
I was inspired to write about this after an email exchange with a friend, who also is my editor; she wrote to me saying:
“Hi hi!
I’ve spent this week editing a writer’s work and it’s driving me nuts! Let me tell you, your writing is immaculate! This writer’s style is very frustrating to work with … I’ve had to try and make sense of a lot of sentences, typos, etc and of course trying to break down slabs of content with sub headings etc. It’s good, solid editing which I enjoy, but it does do my head in at times … I got to the point I couldn’t work out whether focused had one s or two s’s in it … he gave it to me as foccused and focussing.
Ha ha!”
I wrote back saying:
“That is sooo … entertaining … and amazing … your writing is immaculate! Gosh! Truly, you made my day, my week, my month.
“Remember, W., I am an utterly unsuccessful, ignored, rejected, overlooked, disregarded and otherwise never taken any notice of, by anyone … writer. That’s the truth … except for Jan, she loves my writings, she loves me for my writings. She puts up with me due to my writings.
“So there. Lol (Lots of love). C.”
Wendy and I have a strong writing / editing / philosophising history … and then I received this assessment:
“I LOVE your post based on our email exchange … Your writing is sublime to read. Yes I’m being very serious. It’s like reading poetry. I only wish I could write like that. Your style suits my groove, Carsten.”
“That is sooo cool! I’ll print it and put it under my pillow at night! Thank you … the start of my day is getting better and better.”
Below are excerpts from rejection letters by publishers. Nothing extraordinary … standard letters, for standard rejections. I just thought you might like to see them, out of curiosity.
However, there is one aspect to the letters I do find remarkable, where it says “we are not currently able to take your book on – while it looks both promising and original, our editors feel it’s not quite the right fit for our list at present.” But again, this is very much standard phrasing; I have read it (or similar) many times before.
Anyway, at least I have confirmation my book is both “promising” and “original”, “(though) not quite the right fit for (their) list at present.” At present. I guess I’ll contact them again in a year’s time, or in a month, or maybe next week. Perhaps the configuration of their ‘list’ will have changed. Or a new demi-god in the General Publishing Department will look upon my oeuvre more kindly and actually … ah, well, just dreamin’, I guess. (Love the advice I’m given: Contact the local writer’s center … find a literary agent.)
The point for your writer here is this: I have self-published en.light.en.ment a few years ago, in 2012. For many years before I did so – as well as ever since – I contacted well in excess of 400 (four hundred) literary agents and publishers; in Australia (in this country every single one), the US, UK and Germany … hence I am so familiar with the rejection letter format. Though, I have to say, I actually haven’t received all that many … in fact just five; for the sake of truth, here’s a transcript of the formal rejections I received
Dear Carsten Burmeister,
Thank you for thinking of me with your query. While this sounds like a strong project, I’m afraid it doesn’t strike me as a likely fit with me and my particular editorial contacts. I wish you well in finding the right agent for your work … Anne Hawkins – John Hawkins & Associates, Inc. 71 West 23rd Street – Suite 1600 – New York 10010
Dear Carsten Burmeister:
Thank you for your submission to the Fredrica S. Friedman literary management firm. Your spiritual coffee table book looks attractive and interesting; unfortunately, it is not a good fit for our agency at this time. Best of luck finding representation elsewhere … Sincerely, Chandler Smith – Assistant to Fredrica S. Friedman – President, Fredrica S. Friedman & Co., Inc. Literary Management / 136 East 57th Street, 14th Floor / New York, NY 10022
Hi, Carsten,
Thank you for your query. While your project certainly has merit, I’m just not wild enough about the concept to take it on. As I’m sure you know – opinions vary considerably in this business, and mine is but one. I’m certain you’ll find others who feel differently … Wishing you the best, Laney K. Becker Folio Literary Management, LLC 505 Eighth Avenue – suite 603 New York, NY 10018 212.400.1494
Dear Carsten,
Thank you for sending a proposal of your work to us for consideration. Though we found your material to be intriguing and smart, unfortunately we feel that this project is not right for us. We’re sorry that we can’t respond with good news, but we’re sure you’ll find the right representation for you and your work elsewhere. Good luck on the road to publication … Sincerely, Foundry Literary + Media
Dear Carsten,
Thank you very much for contacting us with your submission for en.light.en.ment. Unfortunately, we are not currently able to take your book on – while it looks both promising and original, our editors feel that it’s not quite the right fit for our list at present. This is of course just one perspective, so you may wish to try showing your work to other publishers … General Publishing Department, Penguin Group (Australia) (a division of Penguin Australia Pty Ltd), 707 Collins Street, Melbourne VIC 3008, penguin.com.au
One percent. Yep, that’s the number, roughly 1% of publishing professionals contacted have graced me with a response, albeit a rejection. OK, now please don’t get me wrong: These five responses are the highlight of my publishing career. I am ever so thankful to everyone of them … not just for bothering to respond at all, but also for their kind words.
So now I can add “promising” and “original” to “a strong project”, “attractive”, “Interesting”, “has merit”, “intriguing“ and “smart”. I guess that means – in a curious, queer way – I am indeed a successful writer. Methinks that’s worth writing about.
Below is a typical example of a rejection letter:
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But, hey, that’s no the end of it. To the question … would you like to be a writer? Chances are – Seth Godin says – yes; what with 75,000 books a year published in the US alone, you probably are a published author, are in the process of getting a book ready for publication or would like to be a (published) author. Welcome to the club.
I was told a while ago I have been a published author for years, for decades, in fact. I have more than fifty published letters to the newspaper to my name. Yet, that’s not the first thought that springs to mind when one thinks of oneself as a writer … it’s more ambitious than that (though, I warn you about trying to get letters published in your newspaper … 50 published equals more than 500 written).
So what’s in it … writing a book? Says Seth (in the closing paragraph of this post): “Writing a book is a tremendous experience … It clarifies your thinking …”
I second that. It indeed is a tremendous experience. And it’s clarifying my thinking. So while I have a very small readership, I nevertheless cherish my readers – that’s you – and herewith thank you for being in my life. I mean it.
So, do I have advice for anyone who thinks of sitting down at the keyboard to write? Yes, I also second Ernest Hemingway: You’ll bleed, you’ll hurt … you’ll be frustrated, disappointed, even shattered* by some of the feedback. But, trust me, it’s all worth it, you’ll come out on top in one way or another.
*Shattered? Oh yes. Among all the responses I got over the years from the hundreds of literary agents & publishers I contacted, one stands out … earlier this year I approached Jeff Kleinman, principal of Folio Literary Management – when I follow up, he wrote back:
“Unfortunately, though, I didn’t think the writing itself was quite strong enough. Sorry!”
Indeed, I was shattered. For the first time someone told me what s/he really thought, instead of the usual non-committal pleasantries. What do you do? Well … you lick your wounds and carry on. I have recovered, but this story gives you an idea of what you’re in for. If you’re lucky, someone will be honest with you; but mostly you will be fobbed off … if not ignored.
(OK, so what did it do for me that a publishing professional was honest? The result is profound: I give up trying to get published in mainstream publishing; think about it: some 400 agents and publishers contacted. Combined with what I have learnt through this post, I stopped “positive thinking” and switched to “realistic thinking” … it feels good. Check out my essay THINKING in my book with three definitions for the term en.light.en.ment instead of a title; for you, dear readers, it means my book will only ever be available on this website.)
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Anyway, Seth Godin is in a much better position to give advice than myself … here – in a nutshell – is what you’ll get out of this post:
Think really hard before you spend a year trying to please one person in New York to get your book published (outch)
Understand that book publishing is an organized hobby, not a business
Get your head around that a non-fiction book is a souvenir
Lower your expectations
So this is Seth Godin’s advice for authors, and since it’s free, feel free to ignore the first point Seth makes:
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Always beware free advice. It is worth what it costs!
That said, I get a fair number of notes from well respected, intelligent people who are embarking on their first non-fiction book project. They tend to ask very similar questions, so I thought I’d go ahead and put down my five big ideas in one place to make it easier for everyone.
I guarantee you that you won’t agree with all of them, but, as they say, your mileage may vary.
- Please understand that book publishing is an organized hobby, not a business.The return on equity and return on time for authors and for publishers is horrendous. If you’re doing it for the money, you’re going to be disappointed.
On the other hand, a book gives you leverage to spread an idea and a brand far and wide. There’s a worldview that’s quite common that says that people who write books know what they are talking about and that a book confers some sort of authority.
- The timeframe for the launch of books has gone from silly to unrealistic. When the world moved more slowly, waiting more than a year for a book to come out was not great, but tolerable. Today, even though all other media has accelerated, books still take a year or more. You need to consider what the shelf life of your idea is.
- There is no such thing as effective book promotion by a book publisher. This isn’t true, of course. Harry Potter gets promoted. So did Freakonomics. But out of the 75,000 titles published last year in the US alone, I figure 100 were effectively promoted by the publishers. This leaves a pretty big gap.
This gap is either unfilled, in which case the book fails, or it is filled by the author. Here’s the thing: publishing a book is really nothing but a socially acceptable opportunity to promote yourself and your ideas far and wide and often.
If you don’t promote it, no one will. If you don’t have a better strategy than, “Let’s get on Oprah” you should stop now. If you don’t have an asset already–a permission base of thousands or tens of thousands of people, a popular blog, thousands of employees, a personal relationship with Willard Scott… then it’s too late to start building that asset once you start working on a book.
By the way, blurbs don’t sell books. Not really. You can get all the blurbs in the world for your book and it won’t help if you haven’t done everything else (quick aside: the guy who invented the word “blurb” also wrote the poem Purple Cow).
- Books cost money and require the user to read them for the idea to spread.Obvious, sure, but real problems. Real problems because the cost of a book introduces friction to your idea. It makes the idea spread much much more slowly than an online meme because in order for it to spread, someone has to buy it. Add to that the growing (and sad) fact that people hate to read. Too often, people have told me, with pride, that they read three chapters of my book. Just three.
- Publishing is like venture capital, not like printing. Printing your own book is very very easy and not particularly expensive. You can hire professional copyeditors and designers and end up with a book that looks just like one from Random House. That’s easy stuff.
What Random House and others do is invest. They invest cash in an advance. They invest time in creating the book itself and selling it in and they invest more cash in printing books. Like all VCs, they want a big return.
If you need the advance to live on, then publishers serve an essential function. If, on the other hand, you’re like most non-fiction authors and spreading the idea is worth more than the advance, you may not.
So, what’s my best advice?
Build an asset. Large numbers of influential people who read your blog or read your emails or watch your TV show or love your restaurant or or or …
Then, put your idea into a format where it will spread fast. That could be an ebook (a free one) or a pamphlet (a cheap one – the Joy of Jello sold millions and millions of copies at a dollar or less).
Then, if your idea catches on, you can sell the souvenir edition. The book. The thing people keep on their shelf or lend out or get from the library. Books are wonderful (I own too many!) but they’re not necessarily the best vessel for spreading your idea.
And the punchline, of course, is that if you do all these things, you won’t need a publisher. And that’s exactly when a publisher will want you! That’s the sort of author publishers do the best with.
More from Seth:
It happened again. There I was, meeting with someone who I thought had nothing to do with books or publishing, and it turns out his new book just came out.
With more than 75,000 books published every year (not counting ebooks or blogs), the odds are actually pretty good that you’ve either written a book, are writing a book or want to write one.
Hence this short list:
- Lower your expectations. The happiest authors are the ones that don’t expect much.
- The best time to start promoting your book is three years before it comes out. Three years to build a reputation, build a permission asset, build a blog, build a following, build credibility and build the connections you’ll need later.
- Pay for an eidtor editor. Not just to fix the typos, but to actually make your ramblings into something that people will choose to read. I found someone I like working with at the EFA. One of the things traditional publishers used to do is provide really insightful, even brilliant editors (people like Fred Hills and Megan Casey), but alas, that doesn’t happen very often. And hiring your own editor means you’ll value the process more.
- Understand that a non-fiction book is a souvenir, just a vessel for the ideas themselves. You don’t want the ideas to get stuck in the book… you want them to spread. Which means that you shouldn’t hoard the idea! The more you give away, the better you will do.
- Don’t try to sell your book to everyone. First, consider this: ” 58% of the US adult population never reads another book after high school.” Then, consider the fact that among people even willing to buy a book, yours is just a tiny little needle in a very big haystack. Far better to obsess about a little subset of the market–that subset that you have permission to talk with, that subset where you have credibility, and most important, that subset where people just can’t live without your book.
- Resist with all your might the temptation to hire a publicist to get you on Oprah. First, you won’t get on Oprah (if you do, drop me a note and I’ll mention you as the exception). Second, it’s expensive. You’re way better off spending the time and money to do #5 instead, going after the little micromarkets. There are some very talented publicists out there (thanks, Allison), but in general, see #1.
- Think really hard before you spend a year trying to please one person in New York to get your book published by a ‘real’ publisher. You give up a lot of time. You give up a lot of the upside. You give up control over what your book reads like and feels like and how it’s promoted. Of course, a contract from Knopf and a seat on Jon Stewart’s couch are great things, but so is being the Queen of England. That doesn’t mean it’s going to happen to you. Far more likely is that you discover how to efficiently publish (either electronically or using POD or a small run press) a brilliant book that spreads like wildfire among a select group of people.
- Your cover matters. Way more than you think. If it didn’t, you wouldn’t need a book… you could just email people the text.
- If you have a ‘real’ publisher (#7), it’s worth investing in a few things to help them do a better job for you. Like pre-editing the book before you submit it. Like putting the right to work on the cover with them in the contract. And most of all, getting the ability to buy hundreds of books at cost that you can use as samples and promotional pieces.
- In case you skipped it, please check #2 again. That’s the most important one, by far.
- Blurbs are overrated, imho.
- Blog mentions, on the other hand, matter a lot.
- If you’ve got the patience, bookstore signings and talking to book clubs by phone are the two lowest-paid but most guaranteed to work methods you have for promoting a really really good book. If you do it 200 times a year, it will pay.
- Consider the free PDF alternative. Some have gotten millions of downloads. No hassles, no time wasted, no trying to make a living on it. All the joy, in other words, without debating whether you should quit your day job (you shouldn’t!)
- If you want to reach people who don’t normally buy books, show up in places where people who don’t usually buy books are. Media places, virtual places and real places too.
- Most books that sell by the truckload sell by the caseload. In other words, sell to organizations that buy on behalf of their members/employees.
- Publishing a book is not the same as printing a book. Publishing is about marketing and sales and distribution and risk. If you don’t want to be in that business, don’t! Printing a book is trivially easy. Don’t let anyone tell you it’s not. You’ll find plenty of printers who can match the look and feel of the bestselling book of your choice for just a few dollars a copy. That’s not the hard part.
- Bookstores, in general, are run by absolutely terrific people. Bookstores, in general, are really lousy businesses. They are often where books go to die. While some readers will discover your book in a store, it’s way more likely they will discover the book before they get to the store, and the store is just there hoping to have the right book for the right person at the time she wants it. If the match isn’t made, no sale.
Writing a book is a tremendous experience. It pays off intellectually. It clarifies your thinking. It builds credibility. It is a living engine of marketing and idea spreading, working every day to deliver your message with authority. You should write one.